Please tell me if I've made any mistakes.
English is the most important subject for me.
Firstly, you
must pass it in the open exam.
Moreover,it can help you to communicate with foreigner
s as it is
an international language.
However, I didn’t know that when I was pupil.I
spent all my time in play
ing computer games,watch
ing TV previously,I
did not review
before a test or exam.Therefore,I
often fail
ed in the exam.Nevertheless,I have joined a refresher
since I
was p.5,so my results in English have improved.
Many teachers have told me
the importance of
studying English,
so I worked very hard,
I did a lot of revision about English,
such as reading English books and English newspapers,talking with foreigners.
Now,I am
a F.3 student,but I know that my English is
so bad.If I had wrought hard in primary school,I would have been excellent in English.But it was past,I understand that I wasted lots of time formerly.Now I should be industrious anytime.If I never
give up,I believe that I can do it.
I want to be
an anchorman when I
am mature enough
.But if I hadn”t pass in English,
my dream would not come true.
