英文寫作第二篇,唔該咁多位黎睇睇

The most important subject for me is English.Because you must be pass it in the open exam and help you to communicate with foreigner as it is interlanguage.But I didn’t know that when I was pupil.I always play computer games,watch TV previously,I also
had not reviewed for a test or exam.Therefore,I fail in the exam often.Nevertheless,I have joined a refresher as I am p.5 to p.6,so my results in English have improved.And many teacher have told me what importance of English,that made me work hard,
I did a lot of revision about English,such as ,read English book,read English newspaper,talk with foreigner.

Now,I am F.3 student,But I know that my English is too bad.If I had wrought hard in primary school,I would have been excellent in English.But it was past,I understand that I wasted lots of time formerly.Now I should be industrious anytime.If I never gave up,I would believe that I can do it.

I want to be a anchorman when I manture enough,but If I hadn”t pass in English,I would not finish my dream.

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