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1. The average weight of a form 3 student’s school bag is now 5kg.Your school has organized a campaign to lighten school bags by encouraging students not to bring unnecessary items to school. However, you feel thatstudents are not ones responsible for the weight problem. Write a letter to theeditor of the Hong Kong Post saying what you think should be done by textbookpublishers, schools and/or students to improve the situation. Sign you name ‘ChrisWong’
Dear editor,
Picture the scene: A form 3 student brings a school bag which is veryheavy , weighty as well as cumbersome to school every day. A week later , hegot a disease called Idiopathic Scoliosis.
Dose this seem to you or your schoolmates? It can’t be denied thatIdiopathic Scoliosis caused by students bringing a heavy school bag, but Ibelieve that not only the students but also the schools and the textbookpublishers are responsible for the weight problem.
Tobegin with, I think that the textbook publishers can do something to solve the problem. For instance , the textbook publishers must print the textbooks indifferent booklets. If the heavy textbooks are printed in different booklets .students need not to bring the whole booklet, the weight of their school bag will decrease. Simultaneously, the unnecessary, insignificant and dispensable parts such as the blank pages and introduction must be cancelled in the textbook. Canceling the unnecessary parts in the textbook can reduce the weight of the textbook. In other words, the weight of student’s school bag will decrease .Personally, I think the textbook publishers should using lighte rpaper to print textbooks. Although using lighter paper to print textbooks is more expensive, actually this is an effective way to reduce the weight of student’s school bag.
Meanwhile,the schools can solve the problem after they had completed the followingsolution. First and foremost, giving students to use the lockers is a simply ,useful but not inessential way to reduce the weight of student’s school bag asthe students can put less heavy textbooks in their school bag. In respond tothe textbook publisher’s improvement, the schools should choose the textbooks whichare printed in different booklets and used lighter paper for students. This isa way which kill two birds with one stone as not only the weight of student’sbag will decrease but also more textbook publishers will print the textbook indifferent booklets and use lighter paper to print the textbook.
After suggesting the solution to the textbook publishers and schools,what can students do besides cooperate with above-mentioned solution? The firstthing students can do is tiding up their school bag every day. The other thingstudents can do is using a lighter school bag. The third thing students can dois doing homework in school so that they need not to bring too many books toschool.
Taken all together, the textbook publishers, school and students canimprove the situation of the weight problem from following the ideas.Sincerely, I hope that the weight problem can be improved instantly , like awater drop under the sun. In essence the textbook publishers , schools andstudents must solve th problem cooperatively.
Yoursfaithfully
Chris Wong
