英文作文之bad of the bad

1:CUEERNTLY,OWING TO THE CRAMMING TEACHING STYLE AND EXAM-ORIENTED SYSTEM OF EDUCATION.MANY PARENTS SEND THEIR CHILDREN STUDY AT OVERSEAS SCHOOL AND NOT OPT NOT TO STUDYING IN LOCAL SCHOOL.

2:IT IS DISCOURAGING THAT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDY IN OVERSEAS STUDIES AS OPPOSED TO LOCAL SCHOOL.

3:IN GROUND OF THE DISADVANTAGE EDUCATION SYSTEM,MANY STUDENTS OPT NOT TO STAY IN LOCAL SVHOOL STUDIES.

4:EDUCATION SYSTEM OVER-EMPHASIS ON EXAMINATION TEST STUDENTS ABILITY SO THAT THEY ARE OVERWHELMED BY HOMEWORKS AND TESTS.

5:HENCE,THEY ARE OCCUPIED WITH PREESURE FROM STUDIES AND LACK OF INCENTIVE TO STUDY HARD.

6:BESIDES,THESE EDUCATION SYSTEM DO NOT THEST STUDENTS ABILITY ACCURATELY.

7:A LOT OF  FACTORS AFFECT THE EXAMINATION RESULTS THAT IS CANDIDATE EMOTION,ECAMINATION WITHIN TOPIC AS WELL AS CANDIDATE CONDITION.

8:OWING TO HONG KONG SCHOOL LACK OF REPUTATION AND QUALITIES,MANY PARENTS OPT TO SEND THEIR CHILDERN STUDYING IN OVERSESAS AS OPPOSED TO LOCAL SCHOOL.

9:HOW TO DEAL WITH THESE PROBLEMS?IT IS IMPOTANT FOR THE GOVERNMENT TO EXECUTE A SERIES OF POLICY TO TACKLE WITH THESE PROBLEMS.

10:THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD ALLOCATE MORE RESOURCE TO IMPROVE LOCAL SCJOOL QUALITY IN ORDER YO ATTRACT PARENTS FOR ALLOWING THEIR CHILDREN STUDYING IN HONG KONG.

11:THEY SHOULD ESTABLISH AN CAMPAGIN TO EDUCATE PARENTS THAT THE ADVANTAGE OF CHILDREN STUDYING IN LOCAL SCHOOL AS OPPOSED TO FAR AWAY DISTENCE OF OVERSEAS SCHOOL.

12:THEY SHOULD LAUNCH A SERIES OF ACTIVEITIES FOR PARENTS TO PARTICIPATE IN ORDER TO AROUSE THEIR AWARENESS OF THE ADVANTAGE OF STUDYING IN LOCAL SCHOOL SUCH AS :COMMUNICATION WITH OTHER EASILY AND WITHOUT A CULTURE CONFLICT.

13:BY USING POSTER AND OTHER PUBLIC COMMUNICATION INS STRUMENT ,THR GOVERNMENT SHOULD CONVEY THE DISASTROUS CONSEQUENCE OF CHILDREN LACK OF FAMILY CONCERN AND LACK OF GOOD TAKE CARE OF THEIR FAMILY DUE TO CHILDREN STUDYING IN FAR AWAY DISTANCE SCHOOL.

14:THE GOVERNEMT SHOULD ORGANIZERS SEMINARS AND TALKS TO EDUCATE PARENTS ABOUT THE IMPORTANCE OF FAMILY TEACHING IS A ESSENTIAL FOR CHILDREN MENTAL AND PSYCHIALLY DEVELOPMENT,INSTEAD OF EDUCATION FORM SCHOOLS.

15IN CONCLUSION,ACCORDING TO THE ABOVE-MENTIONED,THESE PROBLEMS WILL BE ROOTED OUT IMMEDIATELY.OTHERWISE,THE GOVENMNET  TUEN A BLINE EYE TO THESE PROBLEMS IF WILL BE WORSE

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