請求英文高手教路~~~

Tell him:
date of exhibition: 24 Dec 07(preferred), 25 Dec 07(aslo acceptable)
Model to be exhibition: Japanese Cartoon figures
Budget7000 (Set up inclued)

下面就係我寫既句子。請高手幫我改一改。
點樣先可以寫得高明d,可以拎高分d...謝謝

For the date of exhibition 24 December 07 is our first choice and the 25 December 07 is our second choice.  The model to be exhibition is Japanese Cartoon figures.  The budget is $7000 inclued set up.